As we did for our rough cut, we showcased our final cut on the projector in front of our media class in order to get feedback from people who had been through the same process as us.
We were eager to show people what we had done as we had worked really hard since the rough cut as we had filmed the whole performance again.
Here are some photos of the class watching our music video:
Just like before they were asked to write feedback hopefully including more positives than negatives!
Here is a summary of the points made:
+ a lot better than the rough cut
+titles at the start look professional
+ candle shot was effective
+ makeup was good
+ well edited, editing suits the pace of the editing
+ shots of piano/church really good
+ lighting of church shots are good
+ good locations
+ good use of mise-en-scene
+ good angles
+ first stained glass shot is fantastic
+ high quality shots
+ good selection of shots for a slow song
- zooms are too long and off putting
- shots of the model walking towards camera should be shorter
- model cannot play the keyboard/ doesn't look like she's playing
- lip sync is out in some parts
- second stained glass window shot is not needed and was not in focus
- too many scenes with the book
- too much panning
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